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Behind you
Contributed by
Les4567
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:20:58 PM in AEST
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Leave the headaches
Rid yourself of the pain
Let go of everything
He's put you through
You are better than that
Discard all of the shamless
Comments he said to you
You don't need this
Again and again
You wallow
In your own anguish
While he chuckles
He does not care about you
Why do you let him do this?
Does it make you feel good?
His torturous notions
Tear at your every emotion
Abandon his strong
Grasp on your being
Retire from these feelings of hurt
Put it all behind you
Start fresh
Find someone who
Will love you
Who will never
Hurt you like he did
Free yourself
So you can finally see
A brighter, happier day
Copyright ©
Les4567
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2005-03-01 22:20:58]
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Re: Behind you
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by Petznick on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:56:58 PM AEST
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that's pretty good, it's depressing to see someone with so much potential trapped in a dead end relationship
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Re: Behind you
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:06:04 AM AEST
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I'd call it a masterpeice.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Behind you
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:24:55 AM AEST
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Good advice though. It's easier said than done, but with time and God's help people can find freedom and the happiness you speak of.
Stitch |
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Re: Behind you
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:51:47 AM AEST
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essensial wisdom spoken like a true sage of
romance, lovely write, wish u well . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Behind you
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:07:05 PM AEST
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A real master piece my dear friend.
Written very well.
Hope all is well |
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Re: Behind you
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 02:07:02 PM AEST
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| ::raised eyebrow:: to give any inclination that you can write less than brilliant is absurd. and i never want you to even think "not my best". if it is not your best, than make it your best. settling for less than that is undermining your ability and your gift of talent. and your poem was impressive to say the least. you have talent, you just need to realize it. |
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