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I'd Be There
Contributed by
Mesano
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:43:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I look into his eyes so deep,
My heart is torn asunder,
The pain and love together weep,
Enough to make me wonder.
They told me life was never fair,
But they didn't say love hurt,
Not a game like truth or dare,
Much more than just a flirt.
Any weather - sun or rain,
I'd always love him true,
Always there to ease his pain,
I'd be there to help him through.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2005-03-01 22:43:01]
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Re: I'd Be There
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by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:23:39 PM AEST
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| I have to agree with ur poem. Experience is a good teacher because you experience the pain before you learn your lesson. good choice of word |
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Re: I'd Be There
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:47:46 PM AEST
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Beautifully written I loved how it started and
ended ... this is good stuff.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I'd Be There
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by Dawny on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:45:28 AM AEST
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Wise words there, and great use of emotion as always
Great Stuff
Love Dawny xxx |
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