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Heart Rains Reigning
Contributed by
naveen
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 12:11:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Stasis relinquished to turbulence
Life's perpetuating a storm
Conflating love, hatred and adorn
Hate me
Wanna cry in Anguish
Exhausted dump me
Mind's false bursting apprehensions
partyinf, excuse me
Wanna consumed in infernal serene loneliness
Loser, I am
Insanity fumed, Life's realities
First love, whats love
A empyrean hates, Hatred, rejections my perfect Dates
Annihilated, extirpated
Life depressed, dead sere perpetuated
Don't love me
Rocked abosom, feelings eternal frozen
Life's expectations, rife rejections
Longing, infernal to perfection
Image tarnished
smattering, none to garnish
Don't empathies
A phoenix risen, fears might wizened
Don; t talk me
Life epitomised introspecing aloof walk
Don't like me
Eccentric, hate me incessantly
Frosake joking
Tranquility abiss, heart sere glooming
Try crying me
Eyes withered, tears eternal feathered
I won't risen
No dreams, cann't fly
wings forever wizened
loneliness, eternal bliss
Dark spectre, fearing abiss
World's envies, never depart
Vanquished a knives, life's apart
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Re: Heart Rains Reigning
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by veenu on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:22:15 AM AEST
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hi
i am naveen from india and here i am writing poem under name veenu i read ur poem while i was looking for poems on my mobile...........good poem but...........dont use a high vocabulary......poem must be simple........and full of emotion.........heart rains reigning is ok..............keep sharing |
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