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Songs of the Brave
Contributed by
Tanmaya
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:35:25 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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The sun's gold much-used,
sweetened by the breadth of day,
clasps the hand of the moon.
Who can't hear their music over hill and vale?
Who can know what strange words they say?
Moonshine on the scorched stones...
soothing the wound, with unfelt rain.
Time waits for none, they say.
Nay, it does...when truth calls out,
kingdoms bend and seasons change,
the moon shivers, the sun's gold fades,
the dreams of dreamers wake...
and the wings of many skies,
soar with the songs of the brave.
The hearts of tall mountains quake,
and the waters of many seas,
thirst for the songs of the saved.
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Tanmaya
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2005-03-02 01:35:25]
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Re: Songs of the Brave
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:33:05 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of heavenly wisdom!
Jus what i needed to get me thru the tide that was trying to swallow me.
this i s one of the most beautifull , uplifting, powerfull writes I've read in my 58 years.
I jus can't strong enough words to discribe such beauty.
huggs, smiles, thanks,
jus what the dotta oredered. a touch from heaven.
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Re: Songs of the Brave
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 05:09:30 PM AEST
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Its powerful, but I saw the last line a little differently than what it was intended to resonate as.
Keep writing, Tanmaya. |
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Re: Songs of the Brave
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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A song of courage and magic this is. I've seldom read anything that inspires me as much as these poems of yours - that I can say with easy truthfulness.
I liked the last line especially. Neptune and I come from worlds that don't intersect all the time, perhaps (though I am glad when they do), for it resonated with me perfectly.
Keep this up, most definitely.
Day will come again.
Andrew |
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Re: Songs of the Brave
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:03:45 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Your poems always leave me at a loss for words, right when I need them to comment. Well written.
Take care.
David |
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