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Wheat fields
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:18:46 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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Wide open Kansas Wheat fields waving like oceans With paths of twisters.
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2005-03-02 07:18:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wheat fields
(User Rating: 1 ) by nightwolf on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:20:25 AM AEST (User
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its nice. short, but to the point. good write |
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Re: Wheat fields
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 08:34:54 AM AEST (User
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Writing Haikus is always a bit tricky, you did well with this one. You got the message well and you wrote it perfectly.
Jane ^_^ |
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