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Good Bye Okinawa
Contributed by
NeonHusky
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:49:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Farewell for today,
Hopefully not for so long
Perhaps I will see thee again,
I want you to know
That this is not goodbye
I promise this wont be the end.
This journey Im taking
Is a maze of paths,
Some will and will not meet,
I know not where they go
Or which come together,
Im just following the way of my feet.
So if by chance you find your way to me
Even after to long,
You can know
That I can remember
And that my memory of you will be strong.
Copyright ©
NeonHusky
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2005-03-02 15:49:13]
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Re: Good Bye Okinawa
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by freckle on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:09:52 PM AEST
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This is a nice poem. I have felt strongly for places I've been before. I especially like the atlantic ocean in NJ and Florida. A nice tribute to Okinawa.
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Re: Good Bye Okinawa
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 06:18:22 PM AEST
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This was an amazing piece. I love that each place I visit leaves a little something with me. I have never traveled overseas, just around the mid-west, and the eastern U.S. Your second stanza is a masterpiece.....
This journey I'm taking
Is a maze of paths,
Some will and will not meet,
I know not where they go
Or which come together,
I'm just following the way of my feet.
I just loved that. Very well written. Much peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Good Bye Okinawa
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by Kazzy1231 on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 04:00:20 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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