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Pride
Contributed by
korax
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Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Viewing me thorugh your world
Is a crazy thing to do
I don't think I can take pressure no more
Does your life revolve around me?
Is there nothing more to it
Because you seem to keep me down here on the floor
I feel your eyes of scrutiny
They are bearing down on me
They seem to follow and watch my every move
Escape to me is impossible
So I surrender to your will
My freedom is something I must prove
I know I have my faults in life
You always point them out to me
But the pressure that I'm under is too much
My faults may mean nothing to you
Please don't take away my pride
Because behind this empty shallow soul
I've got too much love to hide
Copyright ©
korax
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2002-12-15 17:00:00]
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Re: Pride
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:09:51 AM AEST
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Pride was a perfect title for a poem like this.....i enjoyed reading this one, it's layed out beautifully, it's as if the words just flowed out...thanks for sharing it...
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