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The Place
Contributed by
Mystic_Beauty_nz
on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:27:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I didn't turn my back on you, I didn't turn away
I saw you turn your back on me, I saw you walk away
A word unspoken. A word unsaid
A space that was. A space now dead
An ocean between us, A sea so wide
A fraction of time, A place to hide
Such briefness in time but time seems too slow
The Place can not hurt you, it helps you grow
A little time, A little space
To consider your actions
Before the whole human race
A moment in time we need to resolve
The feelings of hurt we must dissolve
Life in it's own is way too short
To burden yourself with wounding hurt
I too did turn my back on you, I too did turn away
I didn't want to see the pain, I turned to keep it at bay
I see the sadness in your face, I know it's due to me
I know I took you to a place, You didn't want to be
You say it's meant to strengthen me, of that I'm not too sure
I trust you though, I always will, I know our love is pure
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2005-03-03 05:27:55]
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Re: The Place
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:52:41 AM AEST
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Now this is so powerfull that it is almost guranteed to bring tears.
A masterpeice and it's very powerfull.
Very deep!
huggs,
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