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Sinning Is So Seductive
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:16:07 PM in AEST
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Sinning Is So Seductive
The blood from broken veins
Reflects in the frore flames
Sinning is so seductive
To the impulsive
The moment is heated by lustful desire
And isn't quenched with passion's fire
The skin is gracefully shadowed
And the mood is mellowed
By the passion turned into hate
As the sins still procreate
From broken veins
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2005-03-03 22:16:07]
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Re: Sinning Is So Seductive
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:32:09 PM AEST
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a great one....Normally...
Clark |
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Re: Sinning Is So Seductive
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:18:14 AM AEST
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| An excellent write. Shows such great depth in words. |
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Re: Sinning Is So Seductive
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 08:27:25 PM AEST
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| Excellent job, I see you're still writing the dark one's. I have missed reading your work, and I will have to catch up on it. Again awesome job. |
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Re: Sinning Is So Seductive
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by helianthus on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:21:15 PM AEST
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oooh, I like this one
"as the sins still procreate"...love this line |
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Re: Sinning Is So Seductive
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:03:08 PM AEST
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| i'm so guilty of this, no matter how much i like Buddha's ideas of everything taken in moderation. and it's so true too, desire isnt ever quenched, your words really spoke to me here, and you really brought it all together bit by bit as you ended it. lovely piece |
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Re: Sinning Is So Seductive
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by venkat on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:51:31 AM AEST
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| Graceful tip-toeing of darkness in this poem as " the moment is heated by lustful desire and as the sins still procreate"..Haaaa..I like this creation :-) venkat |
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