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The Starving Of My Soul
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:35:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I skip a meal
Maybe two
Sometimes three
Doesn't matter to me
I will eat less and less
Then maybe you will see
Pain is starving me
The tears I cry burn with every touch
Sometimes it can be too much
I see the hate of me in your eyes
Makes my heart rip inside
Blood vessels are bursting
Bones are breaking
Stomach aching
This is truly a rude awakening
My emotions are getting stronger
What am I to do
Rip my heart out so I will die
But then all you will do is cry
How do I leave without leaving pain behind
The pain inside of me you never knew I felt
Your words screech in my ears
I'm blinded by your depise of me
Muted by your cruel intentions
You'll never see my pain
The pain I hide
When I lie you do not know
The starving of my soul
Skip some meals
Cry my tears
I have faced my biggest fear
The fear of being hated by someone who's supposed to love you
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:40:38 AM AEST
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So sad but written well.
Ur a very good person for not letting her see your pain but someone needs to help u if your Mom want.
Keep writting.
Huggs, luv, prayers,
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:32:04 AM AEST
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| awesome, well done |
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:37:22 AM AEST
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Amy this was emotionaly sad and heartbreaking... You really have outdone yourself with this. im so proud of you...
Jane @)->--- |
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul
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by lostlady38 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:36:51 PM AEST
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| whoa!!!! i can't believe someone else feels this way.i've been there.i went around for years trying to figure out why my dad didn't love me. if this is a situation with one of your parents please change things before it's too late. if this is with someone else then the best you can do is get out. you definitely have a firm grip on reality.love this one. will read more. |
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul
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by freckle on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:04:43 PM AEST
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Amy, such a sad poem. i only hope that it is words upon paper and that you really do not starve yourself! A good write and keep posting!
Carol |
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:38:46 PM AEST
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*waves from across the room* Hi!
This poem truely blew me away hunnie I'm really proud you. You have the words and feelings to share with other's n they can re late from time to time. I'm so super proud of you precious -huggles tight- keep em coming..
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Re: The Starving Of My Soul
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:47:00 PM AEST
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| some mothers...::sigh:: amy, this is your best one that i have seen so far. the emotion and the words probably had something to do with me liking it so much =] |
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