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Thoughts do meet...
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:32:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Thoughts
do meet...
Passing oceans
that listen
breathlessly...
travelling distances
that have watched
many moons wane...
Lighthouses stand
and guard their
echoes,
thoughts that
carry a glimpse
of the soul...
more mysterious
than the language
of dreams.
Thoughts that
bring
a breath
of sweet-scented
wind.
And in moments
that hide
even from
the all-seeing eye
of time,
voices that are
unlike voices
speak.
And in lands
unlike lands,
in river-shades
under the strong
and the deep,
kindred silences
speak.
Whispering...
"Thoughts
do meet.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2005-03-04 06:32:38]
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Re: Thoughts do meet...
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by veenu on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 08:29:00 AM AEST
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hi tanmaya!!!!passion ocean that listen breathlessly..............great ,talented have u noticed that yesterday and today we are alternating means we both submit the poem nearly at same time.............whatever
great poem keep on writing
and sharing |
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Re: Thoughts do meet...
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by Scarlett on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 08:51:37 AM AEST
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| that was beautiful, the way it was set out made it seem like a gust of wind (hope you know what i mean by that and don't think i'm mad). just because it was short sentances and descriptive words. can't really explain what i meant any better than but either way, that was a lovely poem. |
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Re: Thoughts do meet...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 09:06:38 AM AEST
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I absolutely loved this. Breezy and intimate, full of the mystery
of longing.
well done! |
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Re: Thoughts do meet...
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 04:52:44 PM AEST
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Mysterious and lovely. I really liked the image of the lighthouse.
The simple, short verses are very well done. And as ever your words and expression are truly excellent.
Andrew |
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Re: Thoughts do meet...
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:43:53 AM AEST
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Well done. I like the land you took me to. I felt like I was gliding over ocean and rocky cliffs. A really beautiful sight. Thank you.
Take care.
David |
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