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Addicted
Contributed by
musashi
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:59:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Addicted 10 February 2005
Patiently waiting
Patiently waiting
Forever wanting, wanting to see and be with you.
Your touch it drives me further into your arms
Your voice it resonates within, coursing throughout my body,
Shaking the core of my being
Weak and addicted you have me
Helpless and vulnerable, I remain.
Confused
My thoughts no longer am I the master of them.
My mind is an unfamiliar place, where you are the queen.
This dependence was unknown to me before you,
But what a part of my life it has become.
I know that you will probably hurt me,
I know that my words may fall on deaf ears,
I know that you have the power to destroy me.
Fearing and miserable I wait for the time when you decide,
Haunting my sleep, fears take shape Is there any cure for this pain?
Awaken I reach for you, I know you arent there but still I reach.
Losing you life would be too much to bear.
I want my life to revolve around you this obsession is consuming me
One heartbeat at a time I fall further for you.
What are your intentions?
Why wont you tell me?
Why cant you give me anything concrete?
Why are you doing this tome?
Desperately I face each day, uncertain and afraid.
**Copyright 2005 Nefaria.com | Charles Hamilton
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musashi
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Re: Addicted
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by Scarlett on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 08:39:20 AM AEST
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"One heartbeat at a time I fall further for you."
good imagery, and as i see it a pretty accurate description of being obsessed with someone who's keeping you hanging on.
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