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Our Step
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:31:48 PM in AEST
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I remember when we used to sit on our step,
I have precious memories that Ill never forget,
We used to sit & talk for hours & hours,
Right through the summer & winter showers.
I would lay my head on your shoulder,
Telling you that I didnt want to get older,
Speaking of the horrors of my past,
You told me with love theyd no longer last.
Wed laugh & giggle like silly sixteen year olds,
So wrapped in each other we didnt feel the cold,
We would talk about anything & everything,
Wondering what our futures would bring.
We would share so many a passionate kiss,
If I could go back those times I wouldnt miss,
I would go back & do it all over again,
At that time you were the only one keeping me sane.
I never wanted our shared nights to end,
I think we both knew wed be more than just friends,
Look at us now over two years down the line,
I am still 100% yours as you are 100% mine.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-03-04 13:31:48]
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Re: Our Step
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:36:29 PM AEST
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A charming peice of poetry from one so
eligant a poetess, beautiful memorries
2 delight the heart . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Our Step
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:07:49 PM AEST
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Wonderful flow Pixie and a brilliant read. Hold on to those memories and build upon them daily ...
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Our Step
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:32:20 PM AEST
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What an excellent poem to read, this is so sweet Krissie it made me smile a lot.
Im so happy for you & Mark... Great poem as always and keep those memories forever.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Our Step
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:18:45 PM AEST
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A beautifully written piece of poetry my dear friend. So heartfelt and so truly expressed.
Peace to you Pix. A truly divine piece of work |
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Re: Our Step
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:24:37 PM AEST
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Now this is the type of poetry I love reading from you... I am so happy for you. May you make more happy memories.....and may your love last forever....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Our Step
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by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:44:41 PM AEST
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has a nice thought to it but the end seems choppy. for example the last stanza could be made stronger if changed to:
i never want the nights to end,
we will always be more then just friends,
look at us now two years down the line,
i am all yours and you are all mine;
anyways gl with everything and keep fixing the little things...... |
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Re: Our Step
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by venkat on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:24:24 AM AEST
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| 100% sweet poem..thank you my dear girl for sharing your beautiful fellings..hugs :-)venkat |
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