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chance
Contributed by
findago
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Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:37:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is the chance I never got
To make a difference in the life I sought
My heart has fought for one last try
I have wrestled with the meaning of its plea
And found the answer in the abyss of my mind
I stand staring at final obstacle
Because the final obstacle is the hardest.
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2005-03-04 15:37:45]
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Re: chance
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by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:35:39 PM AEST
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| ending needs work. the reader gets anxious to find out what will happen and then that is it.... |
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Re: chance
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by MemeCaroline on
Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 02:53:18 PM AEST
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| What is the final obstacle? |
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