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CONVERTED
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 03:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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TWENTY-ONE YEARS I FOUGHT FOR THE DEVIL TO UNDERSTAND YOU MUST BE HUMBLE CAUSE I'M ABOUT TO TAKE YOU ON ANOTHER LEVEL THOUGHTS STARTED REACCURRING WHEN I LAID IN MY BED I COULDN'T AVOID THE WHISPERS THAT FLOWED THROUGH MY HEAD AMOUNGST MY DREAMS I DIDN'T TAKE PART IN WHAT THEY WOULD DO BE LUCKY YOU WEREN'T ME CAUSE THESE THINGS WERE UGLY TOO SOME HAD WINGS OTHER HAD HORNS IT WAS ALMOST AS CREEPY AS WATCHING "CHILDERN OF THE CORN" IN THIS WORLD THEY TAKE OUR FORM THEY HAVE EXISTED LONG BEFORE I WAS EVEN BORN THEIR ONLY GOAL IS TO CURRUPT EVERYBODIES SOUL THE ONES THEY CATCH HAVE A DESTAINED PLACE TO GO WHY IS IT PEOPLE BELIEVE IN ANGELS BUT NOT THE OTHER SIDE? I CALL THAT INGORENACE OF THE BELIEFS CAUSE EVEN IN DARKNESS THERE ARE RULES TO ADBIDE BY THEY CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD WHEN I WAS ALONE IT ONLY TOOK DAYS BEFORE THEY CONTROLED WHAT I ONCE CALLED MY HOME MY APPEARANCES STARTED TO CHANGE FRIENDS BEGAN TO REARRANGE MY MIND FINALLY STARTED TO SHIFT AND I WAS NEVER CONSIDERED TO BE THE SAME THE FEELINGS OF LOVE SLOWLY BEGAN TO DIE I STARTED TO COVERING UP MY PROBLEMS WITH A BUNDLE OF LIES I WOULD LOOK IN THE MIRROR BUT I DIDN'T RECONIZGE MY OWN FACE CAUSE THE DEMON WITHIN ME BEGAN TO SHOW ITS FACE I STARTED TO CRY CAUSE I WANTED A WAY OUT THINGS GOT WORSE FOR ME TRUST ME I KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT FOUR YEARS LATER I GOT IN TOUCH WITH MY CREATER HE TAUGHT ME ABOUT THE TRUTH OF LIFE AND WHY I SHOULDN'T BE A HATER THE BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL HAS ALREADY BEEN WON GOD GAVE US A FREE WILL TO DECIDE WHOSE SIDE WE WOULD BE ON
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Re: CONVERTED
(User Rating: 1 ) by mina-1 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:17:55 PM AEST (User
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A strong powerful write. You can feel your pain with the way you express yourself in your poem. It's a hard emotional roller coaster ride our life.
You're right I do quite like your work. A well written piece. |
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Re: CONVERTED
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:55:33 AM AEST (User
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Friend
Very Catholic in your thought.The struggle within temptations about. Self and worth a lot of doubt. Where to go.A higher Being. Bless you friend. You follow the right thing. Good write. I have to comment on others now.There are so many writers that deserve time too.I will definately get back to you.You have much to offer please keep posting.
Your friend
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