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outside beauty-deception
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 04:03:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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a story now begins
as a child cries alone
an angel starts a flight
and a child falls from grace.
The rain was pouring down
everything grew dark
def to all sound
but the beating of her heart
An angel did apear
as a mother began to scream
An angel of sheer beauty
with glowing wings of color
her heart begins to slow
now she's really scared
it's far too late
no turning back now
the angel whispers softly
"child i am sorry
it's time to go,
give in, relax, it's all ok."
the child yells at her angel
who's come to take her home...
"NO! it's not my time to go!
i'm just a kid! It's not too late!
i can feel the rain falling on my face!!!"
Now even the angel begins to cry
"child when it rains
it washes the world with hope,
it's sent to cleanse the pain
all the suffering on this earth...
even i can feel the rain..."
Now the child grows comfused
"i do not understand,
suicides a sin,
and i may regret this question,
but why are you here for me?"
The shinning angel smiles sweetly
as her wings of every color
melt away to ash.
Then her beautiful blue-green eyes
fade until they've turned black.
The angel now extends her hand...
"hello, my name is lucifer
i've come to take you home..."
Now the story ends
as a mother cries for help
police arrive too late
and a child goes to hell...
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2005-03-04 16:03:35]
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Re: outside beauty-deception
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by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:34:07 PM AEST
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| very nice story. needs a few changes and the start seems choppy but keep at it. |
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