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That was'nt my dream Girl: : : But love eternal
Contributed by
naveen
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Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 12:32:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A strange chemistry evolves
As you face, your thought in my mind revolves
You are not empyrean nor a fairy
Now You are my love life's eternal endeary
Used to avoid you,
Lookin for a damsel delirous
Plunging the passions tides
But that passion, never swayed love's delights
Never thought you be my love
But atlast am bitten
Bitten by your mesmerizing eyes
Your thoughts forcing a lonely cries.
You are not my dream girl
But now my dreams evolves
You and your vivid thoughts involves
Its you
sets souls pulsating serene and tranquility
Noone else might beared a weathered rock
But thats you
soften a rock, Am still shocked
Without you
My life a shallow totally hollow
Destined your love, perfect path followed
Looking for your comments
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naveen
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2005-03-05 00:32:07]
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Re: That was'nt my dream Girl: : : But love eternal
(User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:36:46 AM AEST
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naveen ,,,,,,,,,,i think u have mind my words isn't it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,u should know the diamond formed under pressure..........whatever
great poem ,,keep trying bring more emotions
it was great
keep sharing
ya one thing more have u ever fall in love
make a p.m
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