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Invisible Wings
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 04:13:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Waiting hopefully here
Hoping to have lost a reason to shed more tears
Wishing I was there to save you
Trying to make believe nothing is true
Graves should be reserved for only the old
The young should never have to be deathly cold
We dont want people to die
But they do, theres no use in lies
Confront the stranger in your heart
Feel your way through dark
Vanquish your fears, and love yourself more
Try to fly, and pick yourself up off the floor
Sitting by the phone
Hoping youre alive at home
Waiting for that call
That will put an end to it all
Weve all tried to sew up the rip
In our hearts, and mend a broken friendship
But you put an end to everything we had
I knew you were hurting, but I never thought it was this bad
Confront the stranger in your heart
Feel your way through dark
Vanquish your fears, and love yourself more
Try to fly, and pick yourself up off the floor
If you could see me now
Maybe youd see my pain somehow
The phone rings
Afraid of the news this call brings
I whisper Hello?
But I already know
Confront the stranger in your heart
Feel your way through dark
Vanquish your fears, and love yourself more
Try to fly, and pick yourself up off the floor
But like you, I cannot do any of these things
Because like you, I believe I have no wings
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blueeyedevil13
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2005-03-05 04:13:17]
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Re: Invisible Wings
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:53:10 AM AEST
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A masterpeice. U can call it not good but I call it awesome remimds me of an ole friend I know.
huggs,
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Re: Invisible Wings
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by Rhymingron on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:54:03 AM AEST
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| I usually don't like suicide poetry, but this was really good. |
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Re: Invisible Wings
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:30:15 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: Invisible Wings
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by needledancing on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 02:10:21 PM AEST
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Anothers wing that did not fly
Should not keep you from the sky
Fly little bird as you are lighter now
Your loss of a loved one will show you how.
Believe in yourself and the growth you will know
There's no place for angels like you in the dark down below.
This is a fantastic write....keep writing This is a promise of knowledge you are gaining that I see. |
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