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Someone Cared Enough
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 03:10:49 PM in AEST
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This hasnt been an easy year.
It has been filled with so many tears.
The road has been too curvy too rough
And the pain and anguish too great too tough
To bear alone
And yet you have
Youve faced each challenge with strength and courage
And in those trying times you have wanted to give up but
Just when you needed them
Someone came along.
Someone who cared so much.
Someone who listened to your fragile heart.
When it was falling apart.
When it was crying and screaming from the lonely dark
And always missing its mark.
Starving to be loved
Craving for someone
Just to give a damn.
Just to lend a hand.
Just when you needed them
Someone came along.
Someone who cared so much.
Someone cared enough
To never give up.
To never let go
When the going got too tough.
Someone cared enough
To stick by your side.
Even though you felt you were dying inside.
Someone cared enough
To say I love you.
Just when you needed it the most
Someone cared enough.
I wish I could have been there in those trying times
And spared you some of the pain and anguish of the mind.
Or at least to have soften some of the blows
When all the pain drove you down so low.
But all I could do was watch from afar
And pray that you found within yourself the desire
To carry on
To have the courage and strength
When you felt so weak
To never give up and always seek
Someone who cared.
Someone cared when you were all alone.
You may not have known
Because you felt so alone.
But someone did
Someone cared enough
To never give up.
To never let go
When the going got too tough.
Someone cared enough
To stick by your side.
Even though you felt you were dying inside.
Someone cared enough
To say I love you.
Just when you needed it the most
Someone cared enough
That someone was me!
Always walking by your side
Sometimes in the flesh but always in the spirit!
The heart... the mind.
Caring with all my heart.
When you were torn apart.
Someone cared enough.
Someone cared enough
To never give up.
To never let go
When the going got too tough.
Someone cared enough
To stick by your side.
Even though you felt you were dying inside.
Someone cared enough
To say I love you.
Just when you needed it the most
Someone cared enough.
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Re: Someone Cared Enough
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by xtremcalibur on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 03:19:40 PM AEST
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| I think you could have cut out some of the repetition of your write. Although I say those words, I truly loved your write. It was heartfelt. Beautiful at most. You made me feel as if it were meant for me. It was a powerful write that only one sharing your type of gratitude would know. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Someone Cared Enough
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:00:32 PM AEST
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This is absolutely great Donna.
So beautifully written and expressed.
In my opionion you could cut back some of the repetition in your song lyrics, but that's just my opinion. Otherwise a fantastic song.
Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Someone Cared Enough
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by Kitty_cat on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:58:49 PM AEST
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| Brought a tear to my eye |
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Re: Someone Cared Enough
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 09:10:24 PM AEST
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| Powerful and beautiful...I love this piece. |
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Re: Someone Cared Enough
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:36:02 AM AEST
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Wow girl.
This is so sweet and awesome!
As far as repitiions if they were the ones that needed the luv then they would luv the repititions. i'm so proud my dear sweet daughter. most folks don't understand when a person is alone. Thank u for all the thoughts-n-prayers. I jus can't wait till u can sneek of from your family there and come here to visit me.
If a person writes lyrics they should know that the chourus is repeated after each verse. smile.
I do think u have an idea how much this means to me.
Yomomma luvs u 4-eva,
emy
Still waiting for the photo. |
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Re: Someone Cared Enough
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:31:13 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and touching. Good Write. |
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