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what have i done
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 04:18:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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my love sits quitly
staring
taunting me
telling me to pick her up
As i walk to the shelf
thoughts racing
what am i doing
I dont need this
i try to say
theres other ways
but i wont listin
i place
the cold blade
to my wrist
just one quick gash
thats all i tell myself
suddanly
im coverd in blood
my one gash
is to deep
i cant stop the bleeding
WHAT DID I DO
i dont want to die
as i fall to the floor
my mom opens the door
diners ready
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vampyrekiss
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2005-03-05 16:18:27]
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Re: what have i done
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 04:55:21 PM AEST
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| you have to write more i need to read more this poem was amazing!!! Jen x |
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Re: what have i done
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:46:33 PM AEST
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| It was a very interesting poem. And I don't mean that in a "sped" way. I mean it was an interesting point of view, or something, I don't know. I guess the ending just really caught me off gaurd. Kool poem. |
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Re: what have i done
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 04:27:23 AM AEST
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| mah, it was ok, not really original in conception or subject matter. |
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Re: what have i done
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 01:44:15 AM AEST
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| nice ending |
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Re: what have i done
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by brokengirl on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:44:02 PM AEST
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| I like this one...its powerful for me. I like the way u ended it. |
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