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Directions
Contributed by
jogaxchild
on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:34:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Take two steps forward,
There's nothing to fear.
Take two steps backward,
I'm dying in here.
Don't worry, darling, it will all be okay
The moment you make the decision to stay.
Copyright ©
jogaxchild
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2005-03-05 18:34:25]
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Re: Directions
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:04:12 PM AEST
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| this is good for the length, but make it a good poem in general. because its just too short for my liking, i like long poems. ::thinks im cursed:: well i cant wait to see more. |
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Re: Directions
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 06:16:50 PM AEST
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Yeah... add more. I can tell that the poem has a lot of potential. Great write,
Jodi |
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