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Lonley Again
Contributed by
Keeraku
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:59:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It all came down to this last move tonight
But I am afraid that the cards delt just weren't right
Who is to blame I don't know anymore
But I know my heart is bleeding all over the floor
As I walk to the bedroom and shut the door
You don't even look in the direction of the trail it leaves behind
How could you be so cruel and act so blind
On the surgeons table as he trys to meand my wounds
Afraid to come home to have you avoid me with seperate rooms
The voices inside make me scream on the outside
As you tell me I am how much I mean to you for what thats worth
You just throw another rock through my broken window and make it worse
So get away from me now and forever to eternity
So go away yesterday tomarrow and the day after the last day in january
I'm tired of keepin my cool
So now the anger is bustin out like kids on the last day of school
It's time to go down in the books for this one
Because you use to be all of my world
But no longer are the footsteps beside one another
The rain has washed them away and now I wait for better weather
Someday the sun will shine again on my side of the street
Until then I am going stand above you until I land on my feet
Copyright ©
Keeraku
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2005-03-06 00:59:21]
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Re: Lonley Again
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by bttrflynajar on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:13:30 AM AEST
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i really like your style of writing. i think its unique
i like the way you use analogies to express yourself, i believe its much more effective in describing your mood to readers.
awesome poem. i feel the emotion here. |
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Re: Lonley Again
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:49:33 AM AEST
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| Touching in all sense. Anger could turn to hate. It's life you know. The anger thing. You will arise from this on your feet. Planted and confident; a lesson learned. Good write. |
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Re: Lonley Again
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:47:24 PM AEST
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| Gut wrenching....awesome write |
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