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Falling Down
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:47:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Looking back
at the wreckage from crashes
wounds still bleed from broken dreams
I guess
some things can't be ignored.
Searching for
something to believe in
to many Illusions in this burning confusion
has me shakened and unsure.
Falling down
in slow motion is so painful
when I use to care I slipped on a tear
now I'm
damaged
and care no more.
Praying for
thee apocalypse to come faster
no longer want or really need
to be here
here at all.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-03-06 02:47:44]
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Re: Falling Down
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by bttrflynajar on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:09:32 AM AEST
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WOW
all i have to say is that i strive to write like you
because you have exactly pinpointed my feelings.
you express so perfectly how i feel right now especially here you got me ;
Searching for
something to believe in
to many Illusions in this burning confusion
has me shakened and unsure
awesome poetry.... |
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Re: Falling Down
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:15:22 AM AEST
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| Great imagery in this piece. Nice work. |
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Re: Falling Down
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:40:58 PM AEST
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| amazing....just amazing... |
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Re: Falling Down
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:31:20 PM AEST
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Falling down in slow motion....
That's just... extraordinary. I wish, frankly, I had thought to express it that way. Those five words absolute drove this home for me.
As an aside --- it should be simply "shaken"... the 'ed' is unnecessary. *wink*
It feels to me like you're writing yourself through (or out of... even) something --- and, if you ask me, it just doesn't get better than that. If I'm right... I wish you a successful journey.
~SNM~
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