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The Key To Me
Contributed by
vanilla_flame
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:29:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Screams are in my mind
and in my head
I'm afraid to speak
For regret comes to me
and haunts my thoughts
Everyone has angel wings
to guide them and
lift them out of life's troubles
In place of these wings
I have weights that
pull me down
I have these boundaries
that I cannot escape
Your mind encloses me
in this demented world
Hate takes over your
undiscovered thoughts
I see the cruelty in
your ice blue eyes
I want to take a knife
and watch the Ice shatter
I see the morning sun
Shades of crimson it bleeds
Blood has been spilled
Sorrow will take over
and the day will end soon
Silence is in my mind
and in my head
I'm afraid to open up
for the things that I've gone through
have closed up my heart
~Better give credit,
"I see the morning sun
Shades of crimson it bleeds
Blood has been spilled"
I got that idea from Legolas on I think either Fellowship of hte Ring or the Two Towers, I think it's Two towers
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Re: The Key To Me
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:10:49 PM AEST
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| awesome heart wrenching write... |
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Re: The Key To Me
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by catz77 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:24:46 PM AEST
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beautifully written
this is a great write
and i love legolas lol
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Re: The Key To Me
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by budge on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:16:27 AM AEST
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| very emotive im my own worst enemy i let things stew in my head a poem that i could relate to. |
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