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Your Soul
Contributed by
Laurielaurie
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:26:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I made a window
To your soul, but saw only
My reflection.
Copyright ©
Laurielaurie
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2005-03-06 15:26:10]
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Re: Your Soul
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:26:37 PM AEST
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breath taking, beautiful haiku
pix xx |
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Re: Your Soul
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:39:14 PM AEST
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| Very nice your on the right track. The main line of Haikus is 5,7, and 5 syllibles. Your last line had 4 in it. Maybe your writing like the famous Jack Kerouac who wrote in Haiku, and the Western haiku. Which is syllibles at random. I like the Japanese form of 5,7,5. If you get the chance read the [Book of Haiku] By: Jack Kerouac] He died several years ago but I have read it once, going through it again. Regards Wesley Willis |
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Re: Your Soul
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by Compton-tre-block on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:51:05 PM AEST
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im sure yo friend is happy
to see you love em so much..
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Re: Your Soul
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 05:57:52 PM AEST
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| Aww! This is so sweet...! |
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