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Damage You Caused
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 04:10:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They seem to run to me
Like moths to a flame
Am I popular? Could it be?
Had something happened? Was i to blame?
The I remembered what I had done
WHAT HAD I DONE?
Did I use a knife? A gun?
Then I remembered exactly what I had done...
Thursday
Broken in the cruelest way
Pulled and twisted was the knife in my back
After you had had a quick go in the sack
So I decided to show you
The damage you could do
The pain you brought me
But to you it brought glee
Here I am
There you stand
In my heart a knife
To end my worthless life...
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
... [
2005-03-06 16:10:16]
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Re: Damage You Caused
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 05:45:51 PM AEST
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| I truly believe that if you wrote this poem on a different day or at a different time with more thought and passion, this would be a masterpiece. I see the potential. I seek poems like yours. So keep on writing. You would be surprised in the second writing, how powerful it could be. Thanks for sharing. |
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