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Ex-flakes
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 05:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You stare not at me but into me
Why?
I stare back at you but can hardly breathe
Why?
You call me girlfriend but dont relate
I call you to come home but you escape
I kept the sea shells and the wilted rose
Returned your hat and other clothes
You stare through me and see mistakes
What happend?
I stare back at you and get a headache
What happend?
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2005-03-06 17:07:13]
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Re: Ex-flakes
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by veenu on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:07:21 AM AEST
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good....but modifications are wanted....
if u truly love him than show by ur words more emotions and when ever i read i must say oh my god ..........ok..........
u should know that diamond form under pressure .......i am also improving
good poem
god bless u |
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