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My Lost Childhood
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
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Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 05:19:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want my childhood back
I want to laugh
To play without judgement
I want back what should still be rightfully mine
It's something you're not meant to lose at nine
Someone must have it
Maybe it's lost
Can't I have it back? just this once?
Pretty please with sugar on top?
Forget it it's gone
Disintigrated
Disappeared
Finito
What's the point of searching for something that doesn't exist?
What's the point of it?
Of anything?
Of me?
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
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2005-03-06 17:19:17]
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Re: My Lost Childhood
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 05:36:46 PM AEST
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| Don't let the beast within control you. You are still a child within God's eyes. He doesn't judge you for things you are not responsible for. Not to look back and always go forward. Become strong within yourself. No one knows but God. Those of them that a child will be judged in the end. Much love to you. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: My Lost Childhood
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by Nobrainer on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 09:46:16 PM AEST
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interesting poem.. good though, if uve lost ur childhood though, u can still embrace adulthood it cant be that bad
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Re: My Lost Childhood
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by NightOwl on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:04:54 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, and a great expression of emotion... I can really relate, having "lost" my childhood at 8. And you're right, it never comes back. You should focus on and embrace your past. See yourself as a good, wonderful, talented person! This never worked for me, but hopefully you're a stronger person than I am. God Bless.
*~Erin~* |
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