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Words
Contributed by
nobrainer
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 09:12:17 PM in AEST
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The world is cold,
my words are bold,
as I say whats on my mind,
my heart is greaving,
these words are leaving,
my mouth at a pace,
that won't slow down with time,
Though i know I'll regret them,
and the pain that they cause,
I do not try and stop them,
or hold them back,
I just let the words go,
with all the fearry i have.
Then ashamed of my words,
and the guilt that i feel,
wanting to be forgiving,
but not wanting to except what is real,
or admite i was wrong,
I live with my sins,
and hope that if i forget them,
they will be just as good as gone...
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nobrainer
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2005-03-06 21:12:17]
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Re: Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:00:27 PM AEST
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Believe me...they won't!!
(Poem needs a spell check)
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Re: Words
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:03:39 PM AEST
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| needs work on rhyme scheme. excellent concept well presented. hope does nothing without action. |
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