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Kiss me goodbye
Contributed by
subgenius
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 01:15:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In this room of crooked walls,
Nightmares never go away.
Grinding teeth through pressured smiles
Laughing minutes chase the days
"Dance with fire little boy,"
Satan whispers in his ear,
"Shut your mouth and close your eyes.
Maybe then you'll disappear."
Blissful memories and dreams,
Soon erased by violent thoughts.
Turn your back on family
Rooster crows, deny the cross.
Draw the windows, shut the lights.
Self operation begins
Mutilated self-esteem
Breathes through mutilated skin
I will open up the door
As I cross through the abyss
Just promise me the gift
Of one last goodbye kiss.
Kiss me goodbye
Copyright ©
subgenius
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2005-03-07 01:15:16]
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Re: Kiss me goodbye
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:21:19 PM AEST
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| Well written. Peace to you. |
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Re: Kiss me goodbye
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by darkcutterBree on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:55:53 PM AEST
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| one of the best peoms i have read in a long time...it has so much emotion and its got a dark evil twistedness bout it that is totally hott! |
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Re: Kiss me goodbye
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:38:28 PM AEST
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Wow.
Truthfully, I'm more inclined to read lost love poetry than suicide poetry... and I came here without noting the category. But you held my attention... you held me rapt.
This is a powerful piece... very well written and extremely well presented. I am really quite taken with this.
Impressed,
~SNM~ |
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Re: Kiss me goodbye
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by Dri on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:54:49 PM AEST
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| this has that ernest, yet cynical quality that i've come to expect from you. bravo. -Dri |
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