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Drowning
Contributed by
Nobrainer
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In a sea of people,
Drowning falling from sight,
my arms, my legs to weak to fight.
Panic stricken,
my heart all a flutter,
falling more with each word I utter.
Gasping for air,
the more I try and breathe,
the more my breath seems to leave.
Falling drowning from sound and sight,
what is left of the real me will be gone before night.
Copyright ©
Nobrainer
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2005-03-07 12:48:22]
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Re: Drowning
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:02:07 PM AEST
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Yes..one can really feel the despair in your 'voice'
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Re: Drowning
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:29:23 PM AEST
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| The fact that it is short doesn't take away from it's meaning. You definately got your point accross, I think it was great. Perfect length. |
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Re: Drowning
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by Dezchapm on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 04:00:12 PM AEST
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i like it
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