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atmospherics
Contributed by
helianthus
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:29:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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inability to focus
no coherent thoughts
cannot get my head together
you've tied my brain waves in knots
I'd tune to another broadcast
if I knew which button you'd touched
I'd like to keep myself on for you
to let you know I want you so much
electricity is coursing through to each nerve-ending
somehow it mixed my signals too fast
the station is babbling on about a choice I'm making
but I want the interference to last
maybe you can perform a little fine-tuning
my mind is in disarray as my body prepares for submission
there really isn't anything else I want to do now
"quickly!" is my fervent plea to you and me
before careful consideration...
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helianthus
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2005-03-07 15:29:15]
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Re: atmospherics
(User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:51:45 PM AEST
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Intelligent way of explaining what your thought and feeling are about him. I really like it and I hope that things spark between you and the guy you like...
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