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ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:41:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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ITS GETTING DARK OUTSIDE THE QUITENESS IS KIND OF CREEPY I'M TRYING TO STAY AWAKE BUT THE TRUTH IS I'M GETTING PRETTY SLEEPY I CLOSED MY EYES SO I COULD PRAY TO GOD BUT HE WASN'T ANSWERING HIS PHONE SO THIS SEEMED REALLY ODD I TURNED ON THE RADIO JUST SO I COULD STAY AWAKE THE MUSIC WAS FADING AND MY DREAMS WERE READY TO BE MY FATE LAYING IN MY BED I HEARD A KNOCK ON THE DOOR I THOUGHT FINALLY I HAVE COMPANY BUT WHEN I OPENED IT IT WAS MY BROTHER WITH A BULLET THROUGH HIS HEAD LOOKING UP AT ME FROM THE FLOOR MY DREAM ALREADY HAD STARTED I ASKED FOR MY SOUL BUT MY FLESH SAID HE HAD DEPARTED REUNITED AS ONE I WALKED TO THIS ROOM AND IT WAS THERE THAT I SAW A BLANKET FOLDED NEXT TO A MOP AND A BROOM I GRABBED ALL THREE AND WENT BACK TO THE DOOR I PICKED UP MY BROTHER AND PUT HIM ON THE COUCH COVERED HIM AND TOLD HIM THAT I'D BE BACK AFTER I CLEANED THE BLOOD OFF THE FLOOR WHEN I RETURNED HE WAS NO LONGER THERE BUT WHEN I TURNED MY HEAD HE WAS WALKING UP THE STAIRS AS I GOT CLOSER HE HAD ALREADY SHUT THE DOOR WHEN I TURNED THE NOB............ I WOKE UP LAYING ON THE FLOOR
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Re: ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
(User Rating: 1 ) by SourPatchGurl on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:13:38 PM AEST (User
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This poem is so sad. I love the detail that you put in it. Keep writing poems. I would like to read more. |
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Re: ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:57:55 PM AEST (User
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A powerfully moving write. I'm sorry to hear about your brother, and about your dreams. The poem itself is beautiful in a way, written to perfection and flows smoothly. I really hope you find your peace soon.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: ANOTHER DREAM ABOUT YOU
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniels_Princess on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:02:37 PM AEST (User
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Its so hard..losing someone so close to you..and you need them there so bad, that you're mind will do anything..just have them there..I can really relate to this..thanks for posting it up..It brought me to tears.. |
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