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Eternal Slumber...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:57:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Im still here,
Bound to these chainsconfined in this incarceration
These people arent my friends,
Though they smile and act as if they were,
But I know the truth,
And we all wear a mask of deception
I yearn to get away,
Far from this dreadful normalcy,
Into your open arms
Warm and safe from all that gives harm
Darkness loses this war,
Past recollections stay in the past,
And the Monster sleeps forevermore
My precious luna, the mystic moon,
Smiles only for us, and her children weep,
Bittersweet diamond tears
By the shore of dreams,
We walk hand in hand,
Souls forever intertwined,
A love transcending the bleeding horizon,
And we share a kiss
Drowning in silent adoration, hearts racing,
A piano plays in the distance,
And we dance a waltz of love
The rhythm hastens, the piano has ceased its enchanting melody,
And a fast-paced tango between hearts begins
I know I must wake up now,
I know this is only a dream
Duties beckon,
The Queen shouts for her fool,
And I must reply quickly
A slave to this normal life,
My only escape is you
My freedom is found in your eyes
My life is within your embrace
Yet, Day approaches with blinding ferocity,
I must open my eyes,
End this beautiful dream,
And live another day in this prison
All I want is eternal slumber,
So this illusion may live on forever
Dreams end, some come true
I cant help but keep on loving you
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-03-07 15:57:50]
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Re: Eternal Slumber...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:48:39 PM AEST
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A stunningly beautiful write. I love how you set it out with the bolds and italics, but more importantly I love the poem itself. So full of inspiration, hope, love and then sorrow. Deep, powerful and incredibly moving, a masterpiece.
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Re: Eternal Slumber...
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:07:39 PM AEST
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" ... Dreams end, some come true…
I can’t help but keep on loving you…"
There could have been no more a perfect close to these wonderful words. I have heard dreams, if you let them, will come true. To me that means don't try to force their hand or manipulate them into being ... keep them in sight ... and follow where they lead.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Eternal Slumber...
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:40:31 PM AEST
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good God I love your poems this was so
beautifully enchanting and wonderfully put
together. Wow I am awe just so poetic you
definately have a talent but you probably
already knew that.
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Re: Eternal Slumber...
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 07:43:38 PM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful poem!
Sometimes lovers are only dreamers
Until they wake up and the dream is over
Yet the dream is still fresh inside the heart
As lovers wish to be dreamers forever
Good Job! Keep it up!
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Re: Eternal Slumber...
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 08:15:17 PM AEST
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Devine in it's beauty and insight lovely words
and a most gracious flow, u r a poets poet in
every way, one day u will find your freedom u
seek, but now is the time 4 learning . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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