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I Can't Understand
Contributed by
SourPatchGurl
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:07:27 PM in AEST
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I do not understand
the meaning of life
Why man kills his own
Men in general
But most of all
I do not understand
Loneliness
Why people feel alone in the world
Like no one really cares about them
Leaving them in the dark
Unable to reach out
To someone
What I understand most,
Is the beach
The soothing sound of the ocean
The blazing sun
warming you.
Washing your worries away.
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SourPatchGurl
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2005-03-07 16:07:27]
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Re: I Can't Understand
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:45:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful and thought-provoking. I love it. Its well written and flows smoothly, somethings just aren't meant to be understood... Very nicely done, thanks for sharing.
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