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Essential Abetting
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:36:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sweet dreams
Relinquishing the tied seams
Of a nightmare
My life, Only you care
My dreams
Retieing the broken stings
Of my strife
A nightmare, my life
Sour nightmares
Relinquishing my cares
Of a dream
With only you, deemed
Your nightmares
Retieing my dreams
Only for each other, we care
Soeing riped seams
...
You break
I tie
I ache
You cry
...
Two empty souls
Together we make
Each other
Whole
...
For if there were'nt dreams
There would'nt be nightmares
Yin and Yang scheme
Without you, Judgement Impairs
For everything eles could vanish
Only me and you left
And I would'nt care
Because I'd be with you
...
But I still can't decide
Which is the dream
And which is the nightmare,
But I love you
And to that
...
I Swear
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-03-07 18:36:28]
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Re: Essential Abetting
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by heartbroken4ever on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:39:01 PM AEST
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And I love you more than you'll ever know and that I can promise you.
Love you
Amber |
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Re: Essential Abetting
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:51:33 PM AEST
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| Very well done. |
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Re: Essential Abetting
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 07:38:46 PM AEST
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Your poem contains so much love in it, good work! Keep it up!
-Butch |
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Re: Essential Abetting
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:47:19 PM AEST
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| you write more love poetry than cupid does...::grumbles:: death and destruction given up for lousy daisies lol. maybe there can be death and destruction to daisies...hrm... |
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Re: Essential Abetting
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:28:17 PM AEST
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truely beautiful, a joy to read:) hugs n' love nessa
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