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Loneliness
Contributed by
lonely-nobody
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 07:06:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sitting here with my head
in my hands
Crying tears that shouldn't
have escaped
Talking to myself again
Thinking there's someone
here with me
Feeling emptiness within
Trying to replace what should
have been
Imagining a place in time
Happy with this life of mine
Sadness all around me
Seeping into my soul
Aching for attention
It's taking control
Seeking revenge on
the should have been
Psychotic with this pain
Homicidal to myself
I can't win in this life
Forever losing in this fight
Surrendering to the lies
I've lost the strength to cry
Copyright ©
lonely-nobody
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2005-03-07 19:06:51]
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Re: Loneliness
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:01:59 PM AEST
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"Talking to myself again
Thinking there's someone
here with me"
Ouch this hit me deep I can relate to it quite a
but and right now i am feeling lonely for
some reason so that is why I read the poem
and I am glad I did. Very well written and just
dripping with pain. I loved how it flowed as
well... I hope you are doing ok since I can
relate to the feelings expressed in this poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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