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another broken home
Contributed by
needs_change
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:20:10 PM in AEST
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i watch as i fade away
another broken promise on a nother rainy day
i watch as you grow strong
no idea that anything is wrong
but you'll find out today
what have i done to me now
i was just trying to figure out how
to cope on my own
in another home
the carpet's staind
the blood pours from my veins
but i can't feel the pain
and i start to fade away
did you ever really care
you never let it show
but i'm dying now
so i'll never know
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Re: another broken home
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by Elayner27 on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:04:44 PM AEST
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| I like the ring this one has also it tells a good tale of the harsh truth. Good write. |
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Re: another broken home
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by Naughtygurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:08:44 AM AEST
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| And like the other poems this is a great write |
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