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Oak Moon
Contributed by
Eternal_Darkness
on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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What is it that the stars cry out?
Or that the wind wishes to celebrate?
The sun has gone away to pout
And all light finds it much too late
So comes the lady dressed in white
Dancing 'round the mighty oak
And there she'll stay until the light
Hidden within the blue black cloak
She'll dance and sing to guide the lost
Who wandered onto her eternal stage
Although for she asks a small moral cost
No one need fear her rage
But when the light peeks far over the hill
She will remain forever in the day the night does kill
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2002-12-16 14:00:00]
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Re: Oak Moon
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by peterdoswell on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 03:22:13 PM AEST
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| I love the " White lady dancing around the mighty oak " Magical piece of poetry ! ! Well done ! |
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Re: Oak Moon
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by peterdoswell on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 03:24:03 PM AEST
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| I love the " Lady dressed in white dancing round the mighty oak " Magical piece of poetry ! ! Well done ! |
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Re: Oak Moon
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:15:54 PM AEST
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She will remain forever in the day the night does kill......that's my favorite line....this is so pretty....you gave beautiful vision in this poem i enjoyed it alot thanks for sharing it....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Oak Moon
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:50:39 PM AEST
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| A beautiful dance of words :) "Who wandered on to her eternal stage" WOW!!! This line is really captivating.It painted a very mystical scene..Thankyou for sharing . |
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Re: Oak Moon
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 06:58:23 PM AEST
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| Wow.........liked the sonnet form best of all...but who is the mysterious white lady? |
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