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I'll Be A Tear
Contributed by
Elayner27
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:00:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the future I'll be a tear.
Cared about for only a moment.
Then roll down the cheek and be forgotten.
In the future I'll be a tear.
As I fall from that cheek to the ground.
I'll soon shatter as I hit rock bottom.
In the future I'll be a tear.
Remembered a little, soon forgotten.
And unknown to so many.
Copyright ©
Elayner27
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2005-03-07 23:00:55]
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Re: I'll Be A Tear
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:47:29 PM AEST
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| awe .. this one is better than the other one .. i cant believe nobody commented yet .. i hope you did not end up like a tear .. for surely ill remember you with this poem .. hopefully we all wont be rolled off a cheek and be forgotten .. Good job ! i really like it ! |
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Re: I'll Be A Tear
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by tiggytom on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 08:50:34 AM AEST
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Nice write, a tear to join the puddle of us all.
:) |
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