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Forever Lost
Contributed by
axeman
on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:34:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I have seen through the lies that everyone is so blind and ignorant to see.
I no longer walk down the same path of my family.
A road of my own I have created,
that brings tears in my family and shames.
I am my own hero, I saved myself from a life long slavery.
I ask for no forgiveness to soothe my conscience.
Meaningless to me and my guilt free conscience.
For I will Sin again.
I do not want the company of others
I will remain solitaire, isolated where no one bothers.
I will hurt everyone who trys to help me,
they failed to guide me to the light of God,
my soul belongs to darkness,
I am forever lost.
Copyright ©
axeman
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2005-03-08 00:34:45]
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Re: Forever Lost
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by enjoiskating6 on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:45:27 AM AEST
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| very very good, i love it. dark like most of my poems lol and it really made an impression as i read it. |
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Re: Forever Lost
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by sapphireshadow on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:26:23 AM AEST
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Awesome poem. Very deep. "I do not want the company of others
I will remain solitaire, isolated where no one bothers."
Sometimes I feel like that too.
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Re: Forever Lost
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:28:02 PM AEST
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That was very dark. "I will remain solitaire, isolated where no one bothers. I will hurt everyone who trys to help me" That's the crazy part, very scary...I like it! Good write!!
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Re: Forever Lost
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by MemeCaroline on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 12:09:05 PM AEST
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| I find the last line to be interesting. |
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