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back in those days........2
Contributed by
veenu
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:06:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i am a broken branch,
my tree shed me away,
back in those days,
light and rays,
a sweet home near to me where my tree stand still on the way,
there live mom and dad,
and a funny boy they had,
as we grow and winter blow,
that boy fall in love with a girl about her i dont know,
both love each other so much,
as i hear them here together,
there laughter and there sound was all around and the gloomy weather,
my dear tree become emotional ,
showing bud of blossom,
in offseason,
somehow there love that was spoken,
and there voice that i hear in open,
that voice lost in woods,
and love break with the words unspoken,
that boy sit here underneath my tree so upset,
that my wooden heart come to rest,
and my tree shed me as he come to know that my wooden heart is now dead,
as the sun (in winter)surround by cloud ,
my tree shed the leaf they fall all around,
i pray to almighty to let there love fly free,
as summer come's after winter,
as new leaf come on my tree,
may! they come here together and prove the love that we praise,
and my dear tree feel back in those days...............
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veenu
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2005-03-08 03:06:44]
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Re: back in those days........2
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:18:46 AM AEST
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Very sad but good writting.
Reminds me of my kids father.
huggs,
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Re: back in those days........2
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by abhay on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:00:21 AM AEST
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masterpiece the way u have written is incredible,i liked most that u r a broken branch and alson telling about urself ................................thats great
god bless u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
may ur words live for ever |
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Re: back in those days........2
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:02:32 AM AEST
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Such a lovely peice of writting love the tittle reminicing taking me back 2 when yeh u nailed it my friend . . .
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Re: back in those days........2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:17:59 AM AEST
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Yes Veenu,
Lovely write from a lovely soul.. Thank you for helping us all remember back in those days..
RLPoetess ; )) |
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