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One Last Roller Coaster Ride
Contributed by
b_rand
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:05:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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they call me a thrillseeker, there`s nothing i fear
and thus comes the puzzle: i draw thrill from fear
my life has run dry, or so it appears
and i can`t help but ask myself, why am i here?
and within this question, my brain lights a candle
there`s still an experience i haven`t dismantled
what would it be like to have my life canceled?
my mind goes in too many directions to handle
i could sail through the universe upon the great wind
i could find myself in a dream forever with friends
perhaps reincarnated - a new body to mend
or maybe just sleeping, an unconcious end
as the anticipation raises, so does the knife
it`s not too deep in that i need to slice
the pain can be dealt with as time becomes ice
i`m finally putting more life in my life
so can any of you give me a reason to stay?
is there any reason left for me to be saved?
i really don't think so - so dig me my grave
i`ve found a new thrill - in goes the blade
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b_rand
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2005-03-08 04:05:58]
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Re: One Last Roller Coaster Ride
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:58:08 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. I really like this one, I think my favourite line would have to be, actually, all of them. An excellent write, deep, powerful and insightful, thanks for sharing.
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Re: One Last Roller Coaster Ride
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by caramelskyair on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:37:25 AM AEST
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so close to home. I’ve been there, friends, etc, etc.
I still cut. But I haven’t been suicidal lately.
Great poem.
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