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why did i stay
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:37:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i have the will power
i have the motivation
i have the dream
i have everything i need...to kill myself
then why dont i
i wondered
for so long
why i stayed
to find love?
to fall in love?
to fufill my destiny?
no, to met you
i met you
a long time ago
we were good friends
then we fell in love
we can make our love do al
keep us togther
tear us apart
even take us away together
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Re: why did i stay
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:12:38 PM AEST
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| hmmm there are alot of things here...that...are....bad. the main thing was that it lacks emotion and orginality, and direction. i can't say you are a bad poet, i have only read one poem but i hope they get better. |
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