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13 roses
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 09:12:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you called
i picked up the phone
we talked for hours
bout nothing at all
we got into a fight
you said you were sorry
that you loved me
and asked me to marry you
i was out of words
could this be
the one i loved
the one i couldnt live w/out
was telling me all the things
that i felt for him
this is crazy
wat should i do
as i try to breathe steady
i think fast
telling im i love him too
but i couldnt marry him
he told me i hurt him
that we were meant
to be together
and he was gonna prove it
he came over the next day
looking good as ever
holding roses
exactly 13
13
i asked him why
"one was fake"
he answered
he gave them to me
told me that he would
stop loving me
wen the last pedal dropped
opened a little black box
a simple
yet elegent
ring was inside
he said
"i need 2 be w/ you"
i said i felt the same
"marry me"
i kissed him softly
and said "yes"
he smiled big
he looked so happy
im happy
hes happy
we're in love
i couldnt live w/out him
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Re: 13 roses
(User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:56:22 PM AEST
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| awe .. is this a true story ? thats SOOO sweet .. i hope he isnt the one you wrote "i hate you" to .. lol that wouldnt be good .. keep writing |
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