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If You Were To Wake
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:56:06 PM in AEST
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If you were to wake,
Up to you I would make,
I want to gently touch your skin,
But Im afraid youll throw affection in the bin.
Im scared youll turn away,
Then with loneliness Id have to stay,
Alone in the shadows with my frown,
Wearing pain as my only available gown.
I look at your sleepy, troubled brow,
Wanting to put everything right some how,
But I am terrified of rejection,
Waiting in fear of hurts resurrection.
You look so close yet feel so far,
Inside I feel heartaches newest scar,
I wish you to wake, but also to not,
As I think your love you might just blot.
Youre the only man alive in my heart,
Yet I am fearful you will depart,
From my soul & from my arms,
Leaving me naked to lifes cruel harms.
I reach out my hand but take it back,
As Im scared your love might just crack,
I look over at you & my heart skips a beat,
My heart lays in hope that again in love we will meet.
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pixie
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2005-03-08 12:56:06]
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Re: If You Were To Wake
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 01:28:36 PM AEST
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Sad yet a masterpeice.
Hang tuff, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: If You Were To Wake
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:01:04 PM AEST
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Emotively sad, yet it was so well written.
Amazing deep sad write hun, im sorry if i havent been commenting more LOL. Will do and check more of your poems.
Jane |
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Re: If You Were To Wake
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 03:42:27 PM AEST
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| it's a good one, pixie. it's so strange how i like every single poem of yours that i've read. Tiffany J. |
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Re: If You Were To Wake
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:20:02 PM AEST
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this is a sad poem
and its very well written
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Re: If You Were To Wake
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by GeminiDreamer on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 07:07:35 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. I feel the same way after I have fought with my boyfriend. I also like that this is all writted in couplets, unifies the poem as a whole. |
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Re: If You Were To Wake
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:03:15 AM AEST
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| How delicate feelings..lovely girl.. this is sooo beautifully written..quite charming.:-) venkat |
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