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The agony of 'But.'

Contributed by Kay-P-M-Devenish on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Agony slithering its coil as serpents do
tighter to a knot inside my gut,
constricting dead
the pulse of love once true,
to hiss betrayals line,
I love you.
..But

Copyright © Kay-P-M-Devenish ... [ 2002-12-16 17:00:00]
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Re: The agony of 'But.' (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:09:08 PM AEST
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absoulutly correct and beautiful

Re: The agony of 'But.' (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:24:03 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking, Kay...Hope all is well with you...
Hugs,
Jenni

Re: The agony of 'But.' (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:09:55 PM AEST
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Oh this holds so much truth in it....geez....i enjoyed reading this one kay thanks for sharing it....Keep em' coming girl..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: The agony of 'But.' (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:12:11 PM AEST
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This is SO cool Kay! Very original.... Keep them coming! :)

Re: The agony of 'But.' (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:57:04 AM AEST
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ahh kay, arg, i just went through this, argggg, excellent and so true, conditional love just is not truelove, hugs, woofies and lotsa warm love, nessa
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