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SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe
Contributed by
gina
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Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Burning itself to provide us light
Symbol of sacrifice so pure and white
If only people were that pure
our life would be much safe and secure
Weeping tears yet it has no eyes
one true thing in a world of lies
Don't you wonder why it cries!
Fading slowly until it dies
Calms your emotions,puts you in a trance
At dinner table adds some romance
Strong inside but apparently weak
Saying all yet it doesn't speak
Shining realities through our shadow
Revealing the deepest and the shallow
Peacefully in my room away from scramble
Join me all ,let's learn from the Candle
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-12-16 18:40:00]
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Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:48:49 PM AEST
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I gots it at the line where it's crying. This is beautiful. Truly. And I totally get it, because I burn candles to calm myself, they are majestic.
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Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe
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by snagamuffin on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:35:24 PM AEST
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| Hey, I just wanted to say that was a pretty cool poem, and I really liked it. |
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Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe
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by OreO on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:28:35 PM AEST
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Oh beautiful this is, this poem needs to be engraved into the side of a beautiful candle of your choice of color, i think i would take it somewhere and have it engraved in like that.......and hey this would make a great christmas present to....geez gina thanks for sharing this one its beautiful....
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Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe
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by Opium on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:48:30 AM AEST
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| I wonder where you got all that talent all of a sudden, but it's great! great job Gina, but don't forget your studies :P |
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