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Remember Seville
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
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Remember Seville.
We used to drink wine and slightly
drunk make love she was so giving
then, but she had to go to Lisbon for
a year to study literature, coming back
we took up where we left but it wasnt
the same, the river we swam in was
hazy and no rainbow trout waked at
dawn; her eyes were full of sorrow.
Lets go to Seville she said, we did
and prayed in every church for a cure
to an illness that has no proper name.
Late at night we ended up in a Tapa
bar where she saw herself as a young
woman dressed as a toreador smelling
of the blood of defeated men, but then,
in the unforgiving mirror, caught sight
her real self and cried. When I awoke
she had gone found her in a caf drinking
brandy with those who fear sunlight, she
had given up the unfair fight against an
illness that has got no proper name.
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Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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2002-12-16 19:00:00]
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Re: Remember Seville
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:53:42 PM AEST
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This was really deep and sad and as always perfect work from you Jan...have a beaut Christmas,
from your fan,
Kay Devenish |
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Re: Remember Seville
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:57:28 PM AEST
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I tried to click on the highest score I am new to this on this site (since it changed) so ignore the 'one' it was supposed to be the top score...bye mate!
It was a ten out of ten for sure. |
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Re: Remember Seville
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:31:46 AM AEST
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Really sad write jan...but it's beautiful the way you wrote it out ...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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