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Cry in my Sleep
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:06:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Crying in my sleep,
Tears of blood i weep.
For my long lost lover,
I hide underneath my covers.
The pain you'll never see,
Trapped deep inside of me.
The stains all over my sheets,
Are from the tears of blood i weep.
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
... [
2005-03-09 15:06:44]
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Re: Cry in my Sleep
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 03:09:11 PM AEST
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I hope that your tears will dry for you soon, powerful and short, deep
pix xx |
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Re: Cry in my Sleep
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by waos on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 07:44:34 PM AEST
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I think it's cool how you worked the beginning into the end and kept
this in a different set up than most do. good job!
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: Cry in my Sleep
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST
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| i like that alot, but you know the tears will dry.. |
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